If you actually made each individual track:
This was an interesting peice, i respect the fact you went through the trouble of creating the tracks, but this song needs a good base line. When it's all melody, it sounds hollow.
If you used premade tracks:
There is no point in just throwing premade trcks together, music is for those who give the effort to make thier own music.
Heh, I made the song in Fruityloops, no other tracks, just made it as it came to me.
It could use more layers.
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